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The girl in the sunset by ~Whynotletmelive:iconWhynotletmelive:



When you look at me, what is it do you see,
The smiling face hiding the pain or the shodow behind my eyes,
Do you even notice im here, or do you just not care,
Its hard to describe how i feel, but this feeling is hard to bare,

I know im not happy, but I know im not sad,
Im confused and unwanted, unloved and clad,
You see me in the distance, a mere silhouette,
A figment of your imagination, one you'd rather forget,

But ive been forgotten, for far to long,
Im craving attention, I need to belong,
The cuts on my wrists and tears in my eyes,
Tell the real story, foil my disguise,

Im just the girl in the sunset, the mere silhouette,
Why dont you come and join me, Im filled with regret.
©2006-2009 ~Whynotletmelive
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Author's Comments

i dont really know what to say bout this but it took me ages to write though, its a mix of two unfinished poems i wrote about the same thing

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:iconhartz-hedgehog:
Wow,
the way you write is amasing, it really forms a picture in my head.

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:iconwhynotletmelive:
awww thanx lotz may i ask wat the picture is.. he he he

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Want to forget all the pain of the past,
Ive got a fresh start at last,'
Im happy... But it all just feels so unfamilier

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March 5, 2006
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